A Science of Secondary Reading™ three-part series on how students learn to analyze, reason, and make their thinking travel across disciplines.

A Moment of Clarity

A few years ago, I sat with a group of 6th graders getting ready to revise their work. When the teacher asked, “What does good work look like?”, the room went silent. Finally, a student named Kalia raised her hand:

“Good… like what the teacher likes?”

Not what the discipline requires. Not what the thinking demands. But what the teacher “likes.”The teacher projected two samples—one strong, one developing—and asked:

“What makes this one clearer? What thinking moves do you notice?”

Students leaned in. They debated. They spotted nuances adults had overlooked. By the end of class, they had co-authored their success criteria. Kalia looked at the chart and smiled:

“Now I know what I’m aiming for.”

That moment stays with me. Success criteria aren’t about tasks—they’re about identity.

What I Wish I’d Understood Sooner

When I was a HS teacher in Michigan, I assumed students understood what quality looked like because I understood it. I thought a rubric and a strong model were enough.

But student after student taught me a different truth.

One high schooler told me:

“I always think I’m doing it wrong. Even when I’m trying my best.”

Her struggle wasn’t about ability—it was about invisible expectations.

That moment changed me. If I knew what I knew now, I would be reminded that success criteria are not about control. They are about dignity. They tell students:

“You deserve to know what good looks like. You deserve to know the thinking this discipline values. And you deserve to help define it.”

This isn’t an instructional strategy. It’s an act of justice.

WHAT — What Success Criteria Actually Are

Success criteria describe what high-quality thinking looks like. They answer the question students care about most:

“How will I know I did this well?”

They are not checklists. Not compliance tools. Not grading shortcuts.

They are co-created clarity that helps students:

  • understand expectations,
  • self-assess accurately,
  • revise with purpose,
  • and transfer thinking routines across tasks and disciplines.

Success criteria transform learning from guessing → knowing.

WHY — Why Co-Constructed Success Criteria Transform Learning

🧠 Cognitive Science: Clarity Lowers Cognitive Load

When expectations are visible and shared, the adolescent brain can focus. Co-constructed criteria:

  • guide the salience network (what matters),
  • become retrieval cues for revision,
  • strengthen metacognition,
  • reduce anxiety and avoidance.

Clarity frees the brain to think.

✊ Belonging, Identity & Justice

Success criteria are equity tools when students help create them. Co-construction:

  • democratizes power,
  • disrupts implicit bias,
  • supports multilingual learners with language clarity,
  • signals: “Your voice belongs here.”

As I often say:

“We don’t guess our way into belonging. We build our way in with clarity.”

HOW — Co-Constructing Success Criteria Across Disciplines

Success criteria should represent the thinking work each discipline values.

ELA — Meaning & Craft

Students notice strong analysis:

  • links evidence to meaning,
  • names author’s choices,
  • explains theme, tone, or impact.

History — Perspective & Sourcing

Students see strong arguments:

  • establish context,
  • address sourcing and bias,
  • corroborate documents.

Science — Patterns & Models

Students identify strong explanations:

  • detect patterns in data,
  • use scientific principles or models,
  • explain why the evidence matters.

Math — Structure & Justification

Students recognize strong work:

  • shows precise reasoning,
  • uses clear representations,
  • justifies why something always works.

Across disciplines, students learn: Success criteria describe thinking—not formatting.

HOW — Teacher Moves That Strengthen Co-Construction

1. Use Strong vs. Developing Examples
Contrast builds clarity.

2. Students Notice, Teacher Names
Students identify patterns. Teachers elevate and synthesize.

3. Keep Criteria Visible & Living
Criteria evolve as students deepen their thinking.

4. Connect to CER & Disciplinary Lenses
Success criteria become part of one cognitive ecosystem.

5. Ask Real Questions

  • “What do strong thinkers do here?”
  • “What patterns do you see?”
  • “How would you explain this to a classmate?”

NOW — Create a Universal Thinking That Travels™ One-Pager

This is the culminating move of the series: a school-wide map of quality thinking that includes:

  • disciplinary thinking lenses (Part 1),
  • CER architecture (Part 2),
  • success criteria (Part 3).

Students keep this one-pager as a portable anchor for clarity.


Optional AI Support

To generate sample responses for co-construction, try:

“Give me two strong and one developing example of student thinking in this discipline so I can co-construct success criteria with my class.”

For the full, ready-to-use protocol—with editable samples, teacher moves, and success criteria templates—the AI-PLC Agent™ includes the complete version.


Series Context

This is Part 3 of a three-part SoSR series on how students build clarity, agency, and cognitive architecture across disciplines.

Why This Matters for the Future of Learning

When students co-construct the meaning of quality, they:

  • revise willingly,
  • self-assess accurately,
  • take intellectual risks,
  • engage with confidence,
  • and bring their full identities to the work.

Success criteria activate belonging. They promote justice. They transform students from task-completers into thinkers.

When students help define what quality looks like, they enter academic spaces not as guests—but as contributors.

This is the heart of Thinking That Travels™.